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Our souls have a collective dream…
To be buried by songs of asphyxiation
ringing through the night sky in our remembrance
Remembrance… I say it with such conviction,
but it’s still just another reverie of abandonment.
We are long forgotten, longed for only by our kin…

We scream for the innocent’s blood,
The blood of ages past, spilt at our discretion,
But the sound is lost in a chasm devoicing past substance,
A rift in a blackout of the mind, devouring our shame.
Still, the remorse is a perennial blade ready to strike,
Poised above our necks, just waiting to be unleashed….

How have we survived this long?
Through tempests brought forth by our eternal foes
Through fire kindled by the heart of Hatred herself
Through blizzards wished upon us by our own children

We will forever dream of absolution, with no release…
©2004-2009 ~phox
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:iconpapersky:
you make my skin tingle when you write....


joygasm.

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:iconphox:
:) I'm glad I can do that for you... :hug:

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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...
:iconlaced-lenore:
Where to begin? This is perfection as is, but i shall take the time to point you to my favourite parts..
Our souls have a collective dream…
To be buried by songs of asphyxiation
...and white waters wash over me

Still, the remorse is a perennial blade ready to strike,
Poised above our necks, just waiting to be unleashed…
...your use of metaphors intrigue and enthrall

We will forever dream of absolution, with no release… you could make this line your signature I think the key is to forgive ourselves ;) Accept. Move on. Love. Live...

I dont know how you do it but your word twistings shake awake all my emotions.
It is a sheer mystery to me why you do not receive more pageviews and comments.
Where are the Lovestruck fans? Do they sleep? I think imagination has fallen into slumber in the brighter cornors of Deviantart

:poke:
:heart:

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:blackrose:—¤÷( ...A crescendo of passion bleeding... )÷¤—:blackrose:
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:) I am what you would call a poet for the sake of poetry. Most other people would go around adding random deviations to their favourites and watching everyone they can. I take my time, lurking in the underbelly of Devart, watching only those with potential or true talent, faving only the works truly touching my soul. Every comment is another piece of inspiration. I don't mind it. :) Hell, I've been here since 2002, and I'm only coming onto 1000 pageviews now! :D

And you... even in your comments you seem to emit a poetic sensuality I cannot yet describe fully..

Forever dream of absolution. :) I just hope you listened to some things I said yesterday.. ;)

Take care dearest.. :heart:

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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...
:iconlaced-lenore:
The noose no longer asks for company for i have taken it upon myself to bottle your compliments and now they hang around my neck as a charm.

If i do choose to take care where should i put it?

:voodoo-prophet:
You going to be online this evening?
I miss you
Elizabeth :heart:

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:blackrose:—¤÷( ...A crescendo of passion bleeding... )÷¤—:blackrose:
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Right next to the charm around your neck. :)

I'm going to try. Maybe... Some bad things happened in the past few hours, will let you know.

Miss you too love. :heart:

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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...
:iconporenn:
This poem is exceedingly powerful, but not too exceedingly powerful. :D

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Stick it to them like a phoenix rise
there's nothing grander than the big surprise
They cannot hurt you with their sticks and stones
About time, take 'em right between the eyes

Garbage-Right between the eyes
:iconphox:
:rofl: Good one! Thanks! Glad you like it. :hug:

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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...

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