Our souls have a collective dream…
To be buried by songs of asphyxiation
ringing through the night sky in our remembrance
Remembrance… I say it with such conviction,
but it’s still just another reverie of abandonment.
We are long forgotten, longed for only by our kin…
We scream for the innocent’s blood,
The blood of ages past, spilt at our discretion,
But the sound is lost in a chasm devoicing past substance,
A rift in a blackout of the mind, devouring our shame.
Still, the remorse is a perennial blade ready to strike,
Poised above our necks, just waiting to be unleashed….
How have we survived this long?
Through tempests brought forth by our eternal foes
Through fire kindled by the heart of Hatred herself
Through blizzards wished upon us by our own children
We will forever dream of absolution, with no release…















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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...
Our souls have a collective dream…
To be buried by songs of asphyxiation ...and white waters wash over me
Still, the remorse is a perennial blade ready to strike,
Poised above our necks, just waiting to be unleashed… ...your use of metaphors intrigue and enthrall
We will forever dream of absolution, with no release… you could make this line your signature I think the key is to forgive ourselves
I dont know how you do it but your word twistings shake awake all my emotions.
It is a sheer mystery to me why you do not receive more pageviews and comments.
Where are the Lovestruck fans? Do they sleep? I think imagination has fallen into slumber in the brighter cornors of Deviantart
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And you... even in your comments you seem to emit a poetic sensuality I cannot yet describe fully..
Forever dream of absolution.
Take care dearest..
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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...
If i do choose to take care where should i put it?
You going to be online this evening?
I miss you
Elizabeth
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I'm going to try. Maybe... Some bad things happened in the past few hours, will let you know.
Miss you too love.
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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...
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Stick it to them like a phoenix rise
there's nothing grander than the big surprise
They cannot hurt you with their sticks and stones
About time, take 'em right between the eyes
Garbage-Right between the eyes
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Nothing worth having ever comes easy...
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